very gud grammar hero oK? (buckingfullshiz's hero)

ok my grammar is not very gud as u can see but i herd forum weqiers very gud lichurasee so i try my best...
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Ok here goes.

Name - Shiz (Unless you give heroes names)
Hero - Pandaren Brewmaster
Model - Pandaren Brewmaster (Unless you give heroes models)

Base Stats can be what you feel like because I'm not sure if we have to include the stats ourselves or not
Primary stat will be Strength
Attack Range will be melee
Move speed can be a bit slower than the Fire Panda

Skills

Dragon-hide Armour (Passive)
Specially crafted armor from the dragons where fire pandas learned to breath fire, made to fit on pandarens.

2.5%/5%/7.5%/10% Magic Resistance, 1.25/2.5/3.75/5 HP Regeneration (Can be nerfed if need be), 2.5/5/7.5/10 Armor

Bamboo for Everyone!
The Pandaren Brewmaster throws bamboo that he always smokes to a point where it doesn't burn to a friend or foe, each having a different effect, if the target is a ally he will imbue the bamboo stick with healing leaves from his keg, whereas if the target is a foe he will breathe flame on the bamboo stick when he throws it. If the enemy swaps or the spell is dispelled the bamboo will explode, damaging nearby enemies. Can be targeted on self.

Ally will receive 12.5/25/37.75/50 hp per second and 2.5/5/7.5/10 Armor for 6 seconds
Enemy will lose 15/30/45/60 hp per second (will not pierce shields and includes hero magic resistance) and 1.25/2.5/3.75/5 Armor for 6 seconds
Explosion will do 75/150/225/300 damage to nearby units where the explosion takes place
Cooldown 30/25/20/15
500 Range

Keg Toss
Shiz tosses a keg full of things gathered from adventuring the world at a enemy, damaging and causing the opponent to lose speed for 6 seconds.

100/150/200/250 damage
-10%/-15%/-20%/-25% Move Speed for 6 seconds
-10%/-20%/-30%/-40% Attack Speed for 6 seconds
Cooldown 30/25/20/15
500 Range

Storm, Earth and Fire
Shiz calls on the spirits of the primary arts of the pandaren and charges forth with lightning speed, earthquaking steps and incinerating trails.
All enemies who are in the way of the charge will receive 50/100/150 lightning damage and 5/6/7 reduced armor for 4 seconds
All enemies who are in the way of the charge will also receive 35/70/105 earth damage and 30/40/50 reduced move speed for 4 seconds.
All enemies who are in the trails of the flame will have 25/45/65 damage per second debuff on them for 4 seconds.
Cooldown 75/65/55
Range 450/600/750
Spell works like a timewalk from void in DotA





PROS:
- Versatile hero

- Good team effort as he can slow, force enemy to not swap and heal.

CONS:
- No escape skills except ultimate that is a more of a damaging purpose


He has great synergy with any other of the three pandas (Due to all 3 of them having a escape skill)

I'm not sure how the ultimate works. You say it's passive and he changes between them?

It changes depending on which stat of the hero is higher, say for example if STR > AGI by 2 points then the ultimate would activate the tanker mode, giving the hero 200/400/600 HP and the other bonuses, however if AGI > STR by 1 point then the ultimate would go into damage mode, giving the hero 15/30/45% attack speed and the other bonuses. Kinda like Morphling from DotA.

And the only way to change his stats is by an item? If so that makes him interesting.. but sort of a mix between overpowered and weak. Overpowered because no matter which stat he gets, he get stronger, but weak because he has a nearly useless ultimate late game.

Yeah I guess so, made a less complicated skill this time. Now hes a brave damager going into the front lines to pwn all those heroes

A passive ultimate? Not sure the devs will like that. Maybe make a passive skill with some active front end - like activate to increase percentages temporarily or something.

Well made a real ultimate that is hopefully sensible.